Need to finally post my single deviation of the year so I could still consider myself an artist until another year passes.

This time it's a story that features my original character Nisha (you can find more Nisha related art and stories here chiefjudge.deviantart.com/favo… ) and an African girl named Amani (developed with the help from evkf.deviantart.com/ ) along with some foot focus and stuck magic adornments that I love. It's my first attempt to write something significant in English (which is my second language) so I'm eager to know your opinion if I should continue. Some advice about what can be improved are welcome.

As I've told, I updated when the illustration that I've commissioned from linart.deviantart.com/ was ready. She is a very skilled artist so the picture came out very emotional and detailed - just how I like!

Just follow this link to see it fav.me/d8nt2q5

What do you think about it?

One more thing - please leave comments. Nothing else better shows reader's interest to the story than a comment. Personally I see no reason to write if no one is interested to read it.

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Если наберётся более 5 человек, которые хотят читать меня по-русски, то подумаю над выпуском отдельных русских версий своих историй (если, конечно, продолжу писать).